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Thursday, August 11, 2011

The Poor Blacksmith Ghost
















One upon a time there was a powerful demon who call him self Lucifer and one day he want to awake the soul of a people who was dies unfair to revenge to the people that kill or punish they . Then on the night he was go to release a soul of one man who was a blacksmith and he dies because the robber go to kill him for a money . Then soul of the man was become a ghost . And the ghost was go to find a robber that kill him with no ideas where the robber is but he saw the hand of robber has a bird tattoo when the robber kill him . Then unfair ghost was go to his house then he look at his house for a while and he think this is he last chance to see his house .
In the morning he can't walk though the sun light then he has to wait until the sun set because normally the ghost can't walk .While he wait he was saw a man that has the same tattoo as the the robber then he can't do anything . when the night come he start to find the the robbers around the place that the ghost saw the man . But there no sigh then the ghost report to the Lucifer(The Demon) :"I can't walk through the sun please help me ".Then the demon give him a special ability that can walk through the sun . In the morning the ghost was go to his house again and wait for along time but there is no sigh again . Until 3 week he suddenly he saw that man then he was follow the robber then he wait till the night to scared the robber but when the sun nearly set he saw the robber has a family to take care then he know why the robber rob him then the poor ghost was show him self to the robber and said word to the robber :"I know you have a family to take care of but you shouldn't rob somebody please stop be a robber I can give you my job as the blacksmith by taking my place and be a good man " after he said to the robber he return to the demon and says to the demon too give him be a soul and his soul was go to the reborn place . About the robber was take the ghost place was a blacksmith ever after .


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