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Monday, August 15, 2011
Ghost that protect People
One upon a time .Has a men , who lived in a countryside . He is 3o years old . He is a goods sailor . Next month , he has to go to do an expedition with another sailor . He didn't want to go , because it very dangerous . And he not sure that he have alive come back. Many days later, it time to go. When he has arrived nearby the Bermuda Triangle. He feels not good . Because many years before have a planes or ships arrived passed there always fall down or disappeared.Every one didn't know about that except David is know that. So David decided to told a pilot don't arrived passed there .Pilot said : We have a detour but it speed a lots of time .When we arrived nearby the Bermuda Triangle. The weather is very strong . It is smoggy and it also have a big rain.It is very difficult to arrived .A few minutes the plane fall down . Unfortunately everyone is death except David is alive . but he is in the water . And then the ghost was come up from the water . The ghost is a person that was death in many years before . The ghost saw David and looked so very pity . That ghost come to help him to an island . Tomorrow ,when he woke up saw himself in the island . He didn't know ,who helped him. 2days later the police came and helped him to came back home . When he arrived there he told everyone to knew about the ghost in the island .
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